Okay guys, may I ask you your advices about a few texts I wrote? I'd like to use them for new tracks but I don't know if they're good or shameful or whatever... so I need advices, please be honest!
Focus:
"You have to focus more", they say,
Mixing the human shapes
Into different packs
Without further study
Or protest.
We reach the path
Where no one will cry
Where no one will smile
Where no one will talk
Futurecriminality:
They are let alone
In front of big screens
They are let alone
We keep on talking about it
We do nothing
We do nothing
Fly:
A bird flew in the grey skies, over the
blurring window, Like a desperate plane
While the truck was waiting outside
Or so suggested noises & imaginations;
There was actually nothing left,
except lights and windows
The bird was gone.
Post-Amnesiac state brainstorming:
What I see: flying newspapers, dead leaves, red cloud, silent streets, echoed steps, loud shadow, nobody. A deafening silence. Chimes away. Dark fluids moving.
Today's happening:
Cold broken bones
Blocked between the sharped claws
Doors of everyday life.
Help comes from both sides
The trap is still automatically
Inactive, Inhuman - or is it active?
She sat
Soon #1:
They were all running panicly
Under the rock rain that's been happening for three days
When something new appeared
A giant shadow, surrounding everything
Destroying and corrupting
Spreading disassembled thoughts
Everywhere, omnisciently
Thanks in advance