ok.
for me though, i also hate stories in the 2nd person.
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Let’s say you have an ax. Just a cheap one, from Home Depot. On one bitter winter day, you use said ax to behead a man.'
no, i don't have a fucking ax. i don't behead people. don't tell me what i do. it's a worthless narrative technique.
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you are on the 14h page. you are really enjoying it. suddenly, a noise outside your window.
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shoot me now. 