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I disagree Kloriel. I think the simplicity of the subject matter mirrors well with the long, almost drawn out lengths of the peices. like, he's saying 'my 4/20 was long and the only parts that are worthy of their own line are subordinate clauses'
this may sound like i'm being a bitch, but i really really liked it, Danny, and i think what you wrote goes really well with the structure.
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