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Oh toilet sleaze
i hate to tell you but i freeze your hands all over me dont show me your face again or i'll cry and show you my pain oh toilet sleaze i love the way your hands do squeeze squeeze my titty miaows the kitty An std must have you infected and soon the toilet will be disenfected you say no and i say yes but all i really want with you is a game of chess |
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^^ ha ha. cheeto is gonna love this one.
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yes
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MUSCLE MARIES
Muscle Maries on a sunny day are much happier like they say They hold hands on busy streets showing pierced nipples on their pumped up girly tits White vests should be worn only in the summer but then muscle maries would stop thinking you'd look like a proper stunner If steroids are not your thing then dont cry when muscle maries say you aint the king I'll conclude this stupid poem stating that i never met a muscle mary who likes Leonard Cohen |
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I like it. I didn't find it offensive at all, so I guess you failed.
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Yes, we soooo secretly want to be persecuted. I liked it...."fucked to hades," very nice.
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it was a different take on the same motif. inspired by your poem. portraying perhaps a less sentimental affectivity (i.e., mine?). and with a little mockery-- but all in good fun.
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Very Charles Bukowski. My style shows more restraint.
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not really. i threw in the rhymes for silliness. bukowski is more raw-- i show the raw, but i emphasize ridiculousness. |
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Your dry, academic style is tiresome to me, !@#$%!
Get the stick out of your ass, for god's sake. |
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I can imagine Bukowski writing about fucking a clock.
You emphasize the ridiculous but it's still raw..."dog face" for example--a very "in-your-dog-face" phrase.
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it's not a stick but a hard turd. gotta wait till the first morning cigarette. |
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Had to work "blue," eh?
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eh, no hard feelings, i'll mail it to you in a giftbox.
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You're a giver.
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i taught piero manzoni everything he knows
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The Undie Sniffer
When I Think About Your Face I Feel Sorry For The Human Race You Go Round Smelling Undies That Certainly Dont Belong To Proper Dandies Spend Your Life Watching Porn Movies I'll Spend Mine Getting Free Goodies Turn To The Left,look To The Right There's A Sign That Says Your Arsehole Must Be Really Tight |
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workin' blue too^
bluetooth alyasa is takin' us to school, those are nice the giving tree oh man, !@#$%!, did you go back to smoking? I never quit, but I thought you may have. |
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