A poem I wrote today.... - Page 2

porkmarras · 05.24.2006, 05:09 PM

Oh toilet sleaze
i hate to tell you but i freeze
your hands all over me
dont show me your face again
or i'll cry and show you my pain
oh toilet sleaze
i love the way your hands do squeeze
squeeze my titty
miaows the kitty
An std must have you infected
and soon the toilet will be disenfected
you say no and i say yes
but all i really want with you is a game of chess

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 05:16 PM

^^ ha ha. cheeto is gonna love this one.

porkmarras · 05.24.2006, 05:22 PM

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Originally Posted by !@#$%!

^^ ha ha. cheeto is gonna love this one.

who's cheeto?

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 05:32 PM

porkmarras · 05.24.2006, 06:06 PM

MUSCLE MARIES
Muscle Maries on a sunny day
are much happier like they say
They hold hands on busy streets
showing pierced nipples on their pumped up girly tits
White vests should be worn only in the summer
but then muscle maries would stop thinking you'd look like a proper stunner
If steroids are not your thing
then dont cry when muscle maries say you aint the king
I'll conclude this stupid poem
stating that i never met a muscle mary who likes Leonard Cohen

Daycare Nation · 05.24.2006, 06:07 PM

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Originally Posted by !@#$%!

i meant to say, i dedicated my poem to daycare nation

I like it. I didn't find it offensive at all, so I guess you failed.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Daycare Nation

I like it. I didn't find it offensive at all, so I guess you failed.

fool. it wasn't meant to offend. ah, the evil-seeking christians!

Daycare Nation · 05.24.2006, 06:10 PM

Yes, we soooo secretly want to be persecuted. I liked it...."fucked to hades," very nice.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:14 PM

it was a different take on the same motif. inspired by your poem. portraying perhaps a less sentimental affectivity (i.e., mine?). and with a little mockery-- but all in good fun.

Daycare Nation · 05.24.2006, 06:16 PM

Very Charles Bukowski. My style shows more restraint.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Daycare Nation

Very Charles Bukowski. My style shows more restraint.

not really. i threw in the rhymes for silliness. bukowski is more raw-- i show the raw, but i emphasize ridiculousness.

Savage Clone · 05.24.2006, 06:21 PM

Your dry, academic style is tiresome to me, !@#$%!
Get the stick out of your ass, for god's sake.

Daycare Nation · 05.24.2006, 06:22 PM

I can imagine Bukowski writing about fucking a clock.

You emphasize the ridiculous but it's still raw..."dog face" for example--a very "in-your-dog-face" phrase.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Savage Clone

Your dry, academic style is tiresome to me, !@#$%!
Get the stick out of your ass, for god's sake.

it's not a stick but a hard turd. gotta wait till the first morning cigarette.

Savage Clone · 05.24.2006, 06:25 PM

Had to work "blue," eh?
Such a cheap tactic.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:27 PM

eh, no hard feelings, i'll mail it to you in a giftbox.

Savage Clone · 05.24.2006, 06:28 PM

You're a giver.

!@#$%! · 05.24.2006, 06:31 PM

i taught piero manzoni everything he knows

porkmarras · 05.24.2006, 06:50 PM

The Undie Sniffer
When I Think About Your Face
I Feel Sorry For The Human Race
You Go Round Smelling Undies
That Certainly Dont Belong To Proper Dandies
Spend Your Life Watching Porn Movies
I'll Spend Mine Getting Free Goodies
Turn To The Left,look To The Right
There's A Sign That Says Your Arsehole Must Be Really Tight

atari 2600 · 05.24.2006, 07:15 PM

workin' blue too^

bluetooth

alyasa is takin' us to school, those are nice

the giving tree

oh man, !@#$%!, did you go back to smoking?

I never quit, but I thought you may have.

05.24.2006, 05:09 PM	#21
porkmarras invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: London - UK Posts: 14,313	Oh toilet sleaze i hate to tell you but i freeze your hands all over me dont show me your face again or i'll cry and show you my pain oh toilet sleaze i love the way your hands do squeeze squeeze my titty miaows the kitty An std must have you infected and soon the toilet will be disenfected you say no and i say yes but all i really want with you is a game of chess __________________
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05.24.2006, 05:16 PM	#22
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,508	^^ ha ha. cheeto is gonna love this one.
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05.24.2006, 05:32 PM	#24
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,508	yes
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05.24.2006, 06:06 PM	#25
porkmarras invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: London - UK Posts: 14,313	MUSCLE MARIES Muscle Maries on a sunny day are much happier like they say They hold hands on busy streets showing pierced nipples on their pumped up girly tits White vests should be worn only in the summer but then muscle maries would stop thinking you'd look like a proper stunner If steroids are not your thing then dont cry when muscle maries say you aint the king I'll conclude this stupid poem stating that i never met a muscle mary who likes Leonard Cohen __________________
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05.24.2006, 06:10 PM	#28
Daycare Nation expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,904	Yes, we soooo secretly want to be persecuted. I liked it...."fucked to hades," very nice. __________________ That dragon ain't the love sweet love.
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05.24.2006, 06:14 PM	#29
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,508	it was a different take on the same motif. inspired by your poem. portraying perhaps a less sentimental affectivity (i.e., mine?). and with a little mockery-- but all in good fun.
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05.24.2006, 06:16 PM	#30
Daycare Nation expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,904	Very Charles Bukowski. My style shows more restraint. __________________ That dragon ain't the love sweet love.
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05.24.2006, 06:21 PM	#32
Savage Clone invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 11,287	Your dry, academic style is tiresome to me, !@#$%! Get the stick out of your ass, for god's sake.
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05.24.2006, 06:22 PM	#33
Daycare Nation expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,904	I can imagine Bukowski writing about fucking a clock. You emphasize the ridiculous but it's still raw..."dog face" for example--a very "in-your-dog-face" phrase. __________________ That dragon ain't the love sweet love.
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05.24.2006, 06:25 PM	#35
Savage Clone invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 11,287	Had to work "blue," eh? Such a cheap tactic.
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05.24.2006, 06:27 PM	#36
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,508	eh, no hard feelings, i'll mail it to you in a giftbox.
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05.24.2006, 06:28 PM	#37
Savage Clone invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 11,287	You're a giver.
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05.24.2006, 06:31 PM	#38
!@#$%! invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: mars attacks Posts: 42,508	i taught piero manzoni everything he knows
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05.24.2006, 06:50 PM	#39
porkmarras invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: London - UK Posts: 14,313	The Undie Sniffer When I Think About Your Face I Feel Sorry For The Human Race You Go Round Smelling Undies That Certainly Dont Belong To Proper Dandies Spend Your Life Watching Porn Movies I'll Spend Mine Getting Free Goodies Turn To The Left,look To The Right There's A Sign That Says Your Arsehole Must Be Really Tight __________________
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05.24.2006, 07:15 PM	#40
atari 2600 invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,212	workin' blue too^ bluetooth alyasa is takin' us to school, those are nice the giving tree oh man, !@#$%!, did you go back to smoking? I never quit, but I thought you may have.
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