I'd like to share my poetry with you - Page 3

MellySingsDoom · 08.25.2008, 02:40 AM

Once again my beat poetry falls flat on it's arse....

shentov · 08.25.2008, 03:00 AM

yr beat poetry KICKS ASS
seriously

MellySingsDoom · 08.25.2008, 03:02 AM

Ah, thanks shentov. I thiought that you may have suspected me of taking the piss out of Bulgaria (which I were not)

Maybe I should do a poem for every country in Europe...up next, Luxembourg!
*puts on thinking hat, thinks of words that rhyme with "Luxembourg".*

shentov · 08.25.2008, 03:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MellySingsDoom

Ah, thanks shentov. I thiought that you may have suspected me of taking the piss out of Bulgaria (which I were not)

Maybe I should do a poem for every country in Europe...up next, Luxembourg!
*puts on thinking hat, thinks of words that rhyme with "Luxembourg".*

why should I care about the whole country. I'm not sure that I care even if someone is taking the piss out of a bulgarian on a SY board to be honest.

shentov · 08.25.2008, 03:06 AM

why should
I care about
the
whole
country.
I'm not sure
that I care
even if
someone is taking the piss out
of a bulgarian
on a SY board
to
be
honest.

------------> looks better, 'specially for the thread's purpose, no?

MellySingsDoom · 08.25.2008, 03:09 AM

Hell yeah!

"Now, please! Pray silence, for I am going to read more poetry from the SY Board."

shentov · 08.25.2008, 03:18 AM

i'd really like to see other posters' work here though.

shentov · 08.31.2008, 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shentov

i'd really like to see other posters' work here though.

none

acousticrock87 · 08.31.2008, 03:14 PM

Plastic is
Too short

shentov · 09.03.2008, 12:56 PM

i find those awesome.
thanks.

btw
i have to agree w/ your rep note. i have a strong blog w/ poetry, but unfortunately it's pretty limited to bulgarian auditory. thats it.

09.03.2008, 01:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shaka Moloch

June 1, 2008

reads o' steadfast miracle babelight
___unite splinters o' orbs 'round see
intense traces reap armories long
___gone banned dirt signs incense
spoils o' cleanliness open roam
___bone speak trades cut foils
close mouths dry silhouettes breathe
___leaves

___________________APRIL 6, 2006
________return__to__the__ specter
_______________plug _deep, _meandering _dance
_________young sap doubled over
_________________from some adventurous climb and
_____________hang,
innocuous, last good word I know
_____________a churlish charm had this old metal v-roofed
shed sprung with rust and vines surround.
______ready for the hard stuff.
______your weight in gold.
___________bottles down
________________tracks
__________________lose
____________________it.

May 31, 2008

She only blinks
_______to present of a sudden
all this nowhere.

wow thats awesome, repped of course

shentov · 09.03.2008, 01:49 PM

good to hear the board lets some ppl to do the rep swing

09.03.2008, 01:51 PM

enough grumpness here. some rep si always good

shentov · 09.03.2008, 01:57 PM

i mean the function is usually ficked up. you have to spread some blah blah before you yadda dadda

09.03.2008, 02:21 PM

yepit sucks. but if you could rep someone all the time crypto could de-rep me all the time too

shentov · 09.03.2008, 02:24 PM

yepit fickit

09.03.2008, 02:37 PM

yepit shentit

shentov · 09.03.2008, 02:48 PM

tit? like, tits?!

or youshentit.com?!

09.03.2008, 02:50 PM

hahaha
both in combination

shentov · 09.03.2008, 02:52 PM

the tuff titty rap!

08.25.2008, 02:40 AM	#41
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Once again my beat poetry falls flat on it's arse.... __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.25.2008, 03:00 AM	#42
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	yr beat poetry KICKS ASS seriously __________________
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08.25.2008, 03:02 AM	#43
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Ah, thanks shentov. I thiought that you may have suspected me of taking the piss out of Bulgaria (which I were not) Maybe I should do a poem for every country in Europe...up next, Luxembourg! puts on thinking hat, thinks of words that rhyme with "Luxembourg". __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.25.2008, 03:06 AM	#45
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	why should I care about the whole country. I'm not sure that I care even if someone is taking the piss out of a bulgarian on a SY board to be honest. ------------> looks better, 'specially for the thread's purpose, no? __________________
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08.25.2008, 03:09 AM	#46
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Hell yeah! "Now, please! Pray silence, for I am going to read more poetry from the SY Board." __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.25.2008, 03:18 AM	#47
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	i'd really like to see other posters' work here though. __________________
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08.31.2008, 03:14 PM	#49
acousticrock87 invito al cielo Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 5,515	Plastic is Too short
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09.03.2008, 12:56 PM	#50
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	i find those awesome. thanks. btw i have to agree w/ your rep note. i have a strong blog w/ poetry, but unfortunately it's pretty limited to bulgarian auditory. thats it. __________________
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09.03.2008, 01:49 PM	#52
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	good to hear the board lets some ppl to do the rep swing __________________
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09.03.2008, 01:51 PM	#53
al shabbray Posts: n/a	enough grumpness here. some rep si always good
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09.03.2008, 01:57 PM	#54
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	i mean the function is usually ficked up. you have to spread some blah blah before you yadda dadda __________________
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09.03.2008, 02:21 PM	#55
al shabbray Posts: n/a	yepit sucks. but if you could rep someone all the time crypto could de-rep me all the time too
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09.03.2008, 02:24 PM	#56
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	yepit fickit __________________
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09.03.2008, 02:37 PM	#57
al shabbray Posts: n/a	yepit shentit
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09.03.2008, 02:48 PM	#58
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	tit? like, tits?! or youshentit.com?! __________________
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09.03.2008, 02:50 PM	#59
al shabbray Posts: n/a	hahaha both in combination
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09.03.2008, 02:52 PM	#60
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	the tuff titty rap! __________________
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