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no. is that cool too?
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Okay guys, may I ask you your advices about a few texts I wrote? I'd like to use them for new tracks but I don't know if they're good or shameful or whatever... so I need advices, please be honest!
![]() Focus: "You have to focus more", they say, Mixing the human shapes Into different packs Without further study Or protest. We reach the path Where no one will cry Where no one will smile Where no one will talk Futurecriminality: They are let alone In front of big screens They are let alone We keep on talking about it We do nothing We do nothing Fly: A bird flew in the grey skies, over the blurring window, Like a desperate plane While the truck was waiting outside Or so suggested noises & imaginations; There was actually nothing left, except lights and windows The bird was gone. Post-Amnesiac state brainstorming: What I see: flying newspapers, dead leaves, red cloud, silent streets, echoed steps, loud shadow, nobody. A deafening silence. Chimes away. Dark fluids moving. Today's happening: Cold broken bones Blocked between the sharped claws Doors of everyday life. Help comes from both sides The trap is still automatically Inactive, Inhuman - or is it active? She sat Soon #1: They were all running panicly Under the rock rain that's been happening for three days When something new appeared A giant shadow, surrounding everything Destroying and corrupting Spreading disassembled thoughts Everywhere, omnisciently Thanks in advance ![]() |
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I don't like the second one, I like the others, some nice imagery summoned. I'm not much of an expert on the "form", so I'll leave further comments to native speakers ha ha.
I keep reading those with lee's voice in my head (bloomington, indiana)
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you got lees voice in your head? bastard give it back to him. nicfit...its not yours.
btw no I havent ordere cause that guy wanted a shitload for shippin. keep me updated for other stuff I should check out |
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last week of holidays.
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enjoy it!!!
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yeah, definitely, enjoy
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yeah definately the fox, hi!!!
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I will try, thanks.
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hey dude! how are you doing?
I'm currently chilling out at home. I have only one lesson hour at school this afternoon (English lesson from 2 to 3), - though I'm going to spend one more hour at school to work on the maths homework with my friend -,so I'll be back there in 45 minutes, but before that I'll have to eat! |
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me too. I a hungry like hell.
and this evening I hAVE TO PARTY WITH MY COLEAGUES...THAT WILL BE TOUGH |
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I have eaten wiener 5 minutes ago
![]() bon appetit fox + al !
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Gosh dude you're always partying, you're the last bastion of the rave generation
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hahaha
the last time we was at that club a freind of mine and I got beaten up by 7 guys pretty bad. we are on topic right now I cant believe |
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Wang.
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